|Reviews for Ashes|
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Wow, I love this. It's really short, but powerful and descriptive. It's an unusual form of a haiku too, and I love that as well.
| Vanilla Tea chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Its short and simple, but very powerful, I loved it. You can really imagine this, too. Fantastic job!
SB, courtesy of the review marathon
| One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This haiku format is different, but I like it because it is effectively unique. The imagery of the 'ashes' in this really held me. Alone, it is a lingering concept. Well done! I loved it!
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (check my profile for details!)
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
exquisite, glad i dropped by, wil DEFO be back 4 more.
| Lancealot chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Quick! but very descriptive and visual
| BloodKnives CrookedRainbows chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
i like the finality in this. if it was longer it may bring about th meaning better, but this has an abrupt way that works too.
| ADreamer'sCurse chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
Wow. Small and stunning! Please always continue your beautiful writings.
~ A Dreamer's Curse
| Tree of Victory chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
I like the metaphor you added in. Rather intriguing.
Thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way!
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
Very Well Done
| AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
I quite like this haiku format. Haikus are difficult to write if you don't know what the hell you're on about P The ashes imagery alone is a very interesting thought. Good work.
| DragonSlayerAV chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
short but effective, nice work!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Reverberates with overtones of life and death; stars and earth; and, so much more... -m-
Earth's skeleton & Life's form-
| Blinded by the Shadows chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
That one person can be such a fount of emotion goes beond me. Keep the peoms coming and I'll keep the compliments flowing.
| SqurielLord chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
good haiku. ashes to ashes-dust to dust isnt to orginal (read the bible) but I think this is good.
| G-unit chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
It's different but it's really good. In other words I would read it again and again. Good title. Keep up the good work.
P.S. read chibichocobo's works. she's on my favorite lists.