Crazy! I totally just read this on Elfwood, and I was so inspired by it that I went searching for more Lilith pieces on DeviantART (for artwork), and Fictionpress (for writing)... and here it is again! Now I can add it to my favourites. Yay. :)

I am not familiar with the myth/legend on which this piece is based, but it certainly sounds fascinating. This is very well-written, very impressive. Your wording is wonderful. I love the "I am become's"...they not only divide up the ways her story was twisted, giving it some organization, but there is a certain charm in them.

"I, with myself, conflict." That line, too, has the simplicity and severity in it at the same time. I envy your writing style. Really, I do.

I'm off to read anything else you may have written. And if I have any spare time, I'm determined to research Lilith. -Leila