Reviews for Leave the Fear
Ocean Soul chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
As I read the beginning I was interested and had to read more, the middle was a little bit 'bland' for lack of better word, my mind began to slightly go somewhere else. But the end, especially the last two words power the punch.
So all in all I liked this! Well done! I'm tiring to think of what may be the reason for my mind-drifting in the middle, when I come up with something I'll let you know.