Reviews for Broken
Jessi Aurora chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Dark like a rose
it comes and gose
steeling your insides
emotion in its high tides

Broken and battered
my life that has flattered
broken and brused
a token of the used

I stand and watch it all melt away
like cotten candy in the rain
avoiding your stare
the one who will be there

I search the world to find one person
a soul mate to teach me a lesson
but i only find the bobwire
that lies beneath my grave on fire
Kethry Jonas chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
If you can write that, ya ain't broken completely. Thanks for the review!
katiebuggie chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
This is sad. But beautiful.