Reviews for Punished
Tate Soyker chapter 7 . 10/18/2005
The first few chapters kinda threw me off with the sudden death and hell thing. But I like the plot so far and I love Melodramatic so this is really interesting to see the characters from a different perspective
hate-fueled chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
you've given me a cool idea, say you start at a new school and in the fisrt day you think you've made a good friend, but then you dont see her for about a week, until you decide to go to her house n find out why...they're having a wake...and in the girl's room, you find a shoe box filled with random journal entries on ripped out pages..you read her story and it touches you, you feel like you knew her more when she died than you did on the one day you actually hung out with her, you go down stairs and see the open casket and kiss her on the cheak goodbye..the end! what do you think? mail megozzax
hate-fueled chapter 7 . 9/5/2005
Wiked! So how did the whole parker and jack thing happen? what would happen if Aunty monica was to get druck and died some how or if she got caught hiting Abbi? where would abbi go? There's another thing for abbi to worry about, maybe thats why she doesnt ditch the family. anyway, good to see that abbi finnaly got with Anna! yay! how about an update on the goings on of the hell inhabitants? there was some kind of war brewing wasnt there?
hate-fueled chapter 6 . 9/4/2005
aw! how cute! *GROUP HUG* awsome so far...k... i'll shut up now til i finnish reading the rest of the chapters-promise! lol!
hate-fueled chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
OMFG that chapter rules! its awsome babes! you rock!

gozzax
Esquirella chapter 7 . 8/31/2005
Oh crap! Abbi got pregnant, didn't she?
Esquirella chapter 6 . 8/31/2005
So far Abbi's life is getting better. I'm waiting for the shoe to drop.
Esquirella chapter 5 . 8/31/2005
I can see Margo isn't really believing Abbi's story. I wonder how she dies and ends up in hell though.
Esquirella chapter 4 . 8/31/2005
Caleb killed himself? Oh no! How come Abbi didn't meet him down in hell then?
Esquirella chapter 3 . 8/31/2005
Powerful chapter. Poor Abbi.
Esquirella chapter 2 . 8/31/2005
Very interesting progression to the plotline.
Esquirella chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Cool start. That last bit was confusing but I can see it'll be revealed as the story continues.
Christine Daae chapter 7 . 8/30/2005
holy poop! this girl has serious problemes! She needs a loving pereson in her life... other than Jack and her 'girlfriend' (forgot her name) Keep Writing!
GertrudeEmily chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Hi Wiccan Wife, its your Wiccan Wife! yay!
Sam Someone chapter 4 . 8/20/2005
ok, yes I have reviewed on this chapter! i yelled at you cuz i thot u killed caleb! 10 points for the ice cream tho!
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