Reviews for Punished
squee chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
cool!
very nice idea and the end is nicely done
~squee~
Siia Faerie chapter 2 . 10/21/2004
I'm in the middle of writing it...im trying to get some more reveiws so i know if i should have a lemon
Hatefueled chapter 2 . 10/21/2004
hey, done a few sketches but I dont have a scanner...so... but hey, when ya gonna load the next chapter?
Hatefueled chapter 2 . 10/20/2004
a few spelling mistakes but otherwise Im loving it! keep it coming!
Siia Faerie chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
o! i like that suggestion hate! thankyou! *gives you cookies, orange juice, and a free left shoe*
Hatefueled chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
o, this is interesting! wheres the next chapter? is the twenty year old Anna? nah, probly not eh? shed reconize her if it was, eh? so, anyway, I think... a little more disciption would be cool, like what shes wearing so you can picture her, and stuff like 'the snotty old man's greasy fingers tapped away at the keypad like it was covered in bugs to be killed'.
Don't Flinch chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
oh. I love the plot that thickens! Like... thickening plots!
armatageShanx chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Yay! I LOVED this! I can't wait to find out about Abbigale and Anna! Anna seems like such a perfect person! *hugs her so tightly her eys pop out of her head*
*Adds to favourites*
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