Reviews for Narrative
TJ Henri chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
I have nothing to say, except: do you have a band? That was unbelievably super. Yes, super. I don't even care that you're not using fancy metaphors that I consider poetically standard - the emotion just cuts through it. I'm tired. Maybe more tomorrow.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
this was pretty good. i liked the 2nd stanza better though