|Reviews for War|
| Giraffe 63 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
A little forced rhyming, but the concept and imagery are quite good. I thought the line, "Long is the fiend's nose" was clever. Nice work.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
I like it.. nice rhyming.. powerful poem.. great job
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
so true, so devastating.
this is, tragically beautiful.
keep it up.