|Reviews for Wishful Thinking|
| Eccentrically-Yours chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
That was wonderful. I loved the last two lines. Grotesquely beautiful. Excellent work.
| The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Fantastic. Another great poem. :)
I liked how you chose to refer to 'the lungs' as being red, instead of black. I know it was probably for rhyming purposes (am I wrong?), but it better fits the poem, rather then if you described them as being black. Nice job.
Writer of Darkness