Reviews for You Must Go On
sheasrebellion chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
awesome poem.
really, really sad.
I think I like the third stanza the best (think cause they're all good, especially 2 and 3). And the last two lines are really striking as well.
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Wow! This had great rhythm. When read fast, this has a great beat. Very cool...
Keep up the creative work,
~Writer of Darkness~