Reviews for Star
xxPoPdAnCeRxx chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
i luv tat poem
Christelle chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Really good work, it was really deep except the ending made it even sadder, maybe it's just the saddish music in the background tho...
LovesTeardrop chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Good poem. Very well written and nice twist at the end. This reminds me of Everybody's Fool by Evanescence.
Thank you so much for reveiwing my poem.
Jessy chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
It's cool, it seems different from most things u've written. What gave u the idea?
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Yes, the ending is very, very good. You build up this story around her, about how she's such an amazing actress, but then you change it all around with just a few simple words. Great work, I really liked it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
wow... very sad ending.. awesome poem