Reviews for Dying Breed
roxy-babe912 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Ok the rhyming is really forced. I would just take the rhyming out. A poem like this shouldn't need rhyming. It should have a lot of emotion to hol din the reader, not a rhythm. Not bad and it doesn't suck as you said it did.
P.S. Will you have a look at some of my poetry?