Reviews for In Your Eyes
futurewriter chapter 10 . 9/1/2004
That was great. Short and sweet with no time wasted. You might want to beat around the bush a bit though, it makes stories more interesting when you add a little suspence. Love it though. I love all of your stories. I've read them all.
crazyscootinmama chapter 8 . 8/30/2004
well done. i think u captured most of the emotions that could be expressed. the topic is really intersting. hope u update soon.
crazyscootinmama chapter 8 . 8/30/2004
well done. i think u captured most of the emotions that could be expressed. the topic is really intersting. hope u update soon.
Terriah chapter 7 . 8/30/2004
wowo
untouchable1400 chapter 7 . 8/29/2004
Thats a very good fic!Please, update soon!
Rose of the Dawn chapter 5 . 8/26/2004
Hey!
I love this story! This is different from what I usually read and I think you did a fantastic job with it! It's easy to read and the western lingo that drops in here and there, which is cool. Please update soon!
*R*O*T*D*
Western Pro chapter 4 . 8/26/2004
The plot is interesting, but you really need to work on the descriptions. I really couldn't find many. Oh, and so you know for next time, it's living quarters, not corders.
Irishdarling chapter 4 . 8/24/2004
What an awesome so far! It really caught my attention, hope you continue to update soon!
ShiloRose chapter 3 . 8/24/2004
Hey,
Love ite! Love it!Love it! Don't stop there,please.
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