Reviews for In Your Eyes |
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![]() ![]() That was great. Short and sweet with no time wasted. You might want to beat around the bush a bit though, it makes stories more interesting when you add a little suspence. Love it though. I love all of your stories. I've read them all. |
![]() ![]() well done. i think u captured most of the emotions that could be expressed. the topic is really intersting. hope u update soon. |
![]() ![]() well done. i think u captured most of the emotions that could be expressed. the topic is really intersting. hope u update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wowo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats a very good fic!Please, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I love this story! This is different from what I usually read and I think you did a fantastic job with it! It's easy to read and the western lingo that drops in here and there, which is cool. Please update soon! *R*O*T*D* |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is interesting, but you really need to work on the descriptions. I really couldn't find many. Oh, and so you know for next time, it's living quarters, not corders. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an awesome so far! It really caught my attention, hope you continue to update soon! |
![]() ![]() Hey, Love ite! Love it!Love it! Don't stop there,please. |