Reviews for Then The Music Stops |
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![]() ![]() Okay, I write poetry and I have to say that I like it. I lover it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reminds me of Dirty Dancing. I wrote something similar once, but nowhere quite as good. Great job. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that it's supopsed to be "breaths catching", instead of "breathes catching". Still, a very good poem. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant! Leads right up to a climax, then just leaves you hanging. The style you wrote your poem in perfectly matches the mood and point of the story/poem. Nice tie in to your story, with the red dancing skirt and all. Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() great, but enough with spanish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was very short and intense. Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I loved, LOVED your poem! It one of those poems where you can see exactly what is happening through you words. Very expressive, and keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha- you know what this poem reminds me of? The Real World Extreme episode right after newbie, Gillian, arrves and they have to tango on a platform that's held way high up in the air by a crane! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderfully erotic and paints a very vivid picture wonderfully, without ever going over to blatancy. I loved the style of this. Very Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, that was cool! It totally reminded me of Dirty Dancing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH i can't believe you advertised my story. i actually squeled and clapped my hands. hah, i'm such a loser. anyways- i love this poem. it's like my sexual frustration poems- as my friend so lovely dubs them. but 10x greater. i love love love it. (oh, and i'm working on the 6th chapter right now) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to think that you wrote that poem just for me because you love me! ) Anyway, I love the poem. It's hot and I love it simply because you wrote it and it's about latin dancing and you know me and latin dancing. Your poem conjured up R rated images of MY Diego(no matter what Fareh says). I know you love him too and if it ever came down to which he wanted more, me or you, it would be you. lol but really, i like the poem for various reasons, but I like it nonetheless. |