Reviews for The Beach 3:06 AM
norg chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
it has alot of emotions besides that of love and i think you captured it really well. Moreover the poem seems to be very personal to you as the authour
poetic nihilistic chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Beautiful and romantic, you have some great work, keep it up!
The Sage of Story chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Aw...
BEAUTIFUL! Two people forgetting about the differences that separate them just to come together on the beach, at 3:06 AM, and listen to the stars...
I love it.
livingonmemories chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Incredible! I love this. Keep it up.
krystal-jasna chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
hi..okay i dun get 'Yo lo quiero vous veux toujours.' but the rest i do and understand it perfectly. it's like you were reading my mind. i love this poem so much!
i-kill-4-fun chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
i'm crying because i just broke up with the one i love and ... this is too much. the love in your poem is radiant.
Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
really sweet! reminded me of the time i was at my friend's party and i sat alone by the fire staring at the stars. great poem! _
tolstoyan chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
Wonderful poem.. Simply beautiful. Flow is a little off here and there, but overall well done. I particularly like the first and last lines.
SilverAndFlames chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
Wow! So powerful! Well Done...
Superus Stupidicus chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
O_O Oh, my...
This is so...*is left speechless*
I praise you!
Good work, keep it up!
Seiten chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
I like this poem. It's true to wtv you felt and it has an interesting arrangement. Good job!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
nice descriptions and I can definately relate.. awesome poem as always... tahnks for your review
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
loved this poem, itz so well written. doubt i could write it any better.
Cliched Kid chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
I love this! :O It's so.. beautiful and.. Well, it made me imagine a really romantic scene in my head. It's very sentimental [that's a good thing of course! :D] and.. well.. It's just.. brilliant. Nothing less. Oh, thanks for the review. -
Mwah,
-Rue
Calibrated Addict chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
simply beautiful...I began to read and fell right into what you were saying. you captured me and I could feel my heart weigh down after I had finished. I love the repitition.
keep relating!
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