Reviews for Adrift in Nothingness
makeshift parachute chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
It's genius. My favorite line is "It's a splinter in my mind." That's great. Anyways, wonderful, I love it. Keep writing.
Kristen
mattrc chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
i feel this way a lot lately and it scares me. it was well written...expressed emotions without coming off as being whiney and full of complaints. nice poem and i can relate, in a way.
brokenglassdreams chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This is a great poem. It's really deep. I can relate well with how you're feeling.
BloodyTearsOfLife chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
this is a fantastic poem. thank you for reviewing my poem. keep writing!
Tipped chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Very simple but incredibly deep. Its the rawness of the soul. thanx for the reivew. btw, luv your poems
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Once again good! you have your own style of writing...just very flowy and it seems to reflect your thought very well
Lady Jedi chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
This is very well written. You are able to convey your emotions through very vivid images. good job. lady jedi