|Reviews for Desynchronisation|
| thickwig chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
scintillating. your poems always stir something deep within me, and connect so damn well with poetic imagery, meaning and that elusive something associated with true works of art. You have oodles of talent. Damn :)
| tiger lily8 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Very thought provoking and it's certainly more then coherent. Excellent.
| firehair-222 chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
this is interesting. quite thought provoking.
thanks for review 'a wicked game' i guess i wasnt too clear. the wicked game was cutting. and i said 'loser dies',(its not past tense) as in if she actually does take her life. 'deaths trinket' was a knife. and 'will she survive?', meaning, will she over come her desire to kill herself.
| thepastisthepast chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
This is good; you're a good poet! I could never write poetry like this...
Well, good job,
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
Wow, your truly talented, this was filled with beautiful imagry and abstract detail. Amazing, keep up the good work.