Reviews for The Dumb Detective
xodaydreamerxo chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
It was funny until i got to the last 2 paragraphs those were gay!. Fix it please! but overall it was good until the last 2 paragraphs
Ashlee chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
I didn't get the last one, the one with the museum. But I'll give the whole thing a 5/10 it was kinda funyy.
Kilroy chapter 1 . 4/28/2001
That was good and funny. Reminds me of a bit from The Bob and Tom Show. "Jack Friday, Senile Detective."
SorceressofDarkness chapter 1 . 2/22/2001
:((( are you SURE we won't be hearing from the dumb detective anymore? please? the first paragraph had me laughing! sooo good!
KaoriRose chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
This is funny. I like it.
Pam chapter 1 . 2/9/2001
this story is humorous. actually, not everyone will laugh because you have to be really good at getting jokes.
LadyAlitheSpiffy chapter 1 . 2/5/2001
Hey it was stupid- but I like that.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/28/2001
It was good. You should write another one. Rehire your dumb detective.
A chapter 1 . 1/20/2001
It was funny but stupid.
goody2shoes chapter 1 . 1/14/2001
Hehe! I didn't understand some of em, but it was still funny.
Bill chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
Not bad, but it would of made a better long story (*hint *hint:)
SeeingIsBelieving12 chapter 1 . 1/10/2001
that is funny! good story! write more, (i kinda thought it was...gross at parts though! )) keep up the good work!
Spot chapter 1 . 1/9/2001
Cool!Really good! Kinda gross but funny too! Good job!