wow. I'm a Pagan, too, but I never had to go through stuff even CLOSE to that. I did experience discrimination, though. I guess we all do. Keep it up. I wanna read more!

Whoa. I only had the chance to read chapt. 1 cause I'm in class and the bell rang, but I am definitely gonna finish it.

I'm glad you updated. Boy, it's been so long I don't even know how I remembered what your story was about. When I began thinking it would remain dormant, I was sad. Please update soon, as promised. :)

HEY! omg - i was totally psyched when I saw you'd updated P! i totally hate door to door arseholes like that! anyway...hope to see another update soon _

luv n huggles

Emerald RavenX x X

Oh, it's really god!

I love this story. "Get back to stepping like the little bitch you are!" I hate to admit it, but I find it funny that a Christian is swearing in the 'House of God'. Although, I can relate as a lot of Christians see me and say "PAGAN! MUST HUMILIATE MUST DESTROY MUST CONVERT!" Keep up the good work.

YAY! Go Lucas! ! ! AW I like Katrina. . . her dad's a bastard though neh? Anywayz. . . Tank you for updating again *huggles*
I am eagerly awaiting the next installment! ! !
Emerald Raven
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just letting you know im loving the story and its so addictive! keep writing! please? im begging! hehe

Wow, Wow!I love it so much! Please keep going!

I have to say this is one story on FictionPress I can actually get into. I think you do a great job of writing and hope you keep up on it. I think you made a great character that can show everyone that no matter our beliefs we are all human and we all feel pain. Keep up the good work!

You know, this scene kind of reminded me of the Inquisition. You know, Cristians attacking, killing, and persecuting others for their non-belief. An interesting story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

emm...right. this is kinda scary to be honest...i thought that ur last chapter was taking things a bit too far. im not sure...perhaps the christians that you know do do things like that? but that neighbour...who just attacked him? thats not a christian thing...and any REAL christian wouldnt do something like that to someone who hadnt done anything to them. just the way you seem to be branding them all as violent bigots? im a christian, but me or any of the christians i know wouldnt attack ppl...even if they were a suicidal pagan, know what i mean!
but here, im not getting on a hobby horse here, lol...i just thought that chapter was a wrong way to look at christians? aside from that, ur character seems to be a pretty messed up guy, i feel sorry for him, although he seems slightly unbalanced. i see that u will be having some positive stuff about at least ONE christian in ur story - oh aye, and Mr Powell, so thats good - keep up the balance ;o)

Your welcome. . .i enjoy reviewing brilliant stories like this, and I'm glad I keep you laughing! *cheesy grin*
YAY! ! ! Another chapter! ! ! *does little dance around computer*
AW! Poor Lucas! ! ! *huggles Lucas*
Evil Bible humpers! ! *shakes fist*
*salutes author* keep it up hun!
Emerald Raven
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It's pretty good so far. And everyone's entitled to an opinion and religion. I'm definitely not offended by anything you say or write about paganism and christianity. I'm cristian and I've met many old, self-righteous geezers like the principal :)

LOVED IT! more more!