Reviews for Little Torment
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
you're right, we do love them, probably because almost all of us could read this poem with exactly the same voice and emotion... writing something that everybody can relate to without making it hollow and empty is something that you have a talent for.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Haven't seen you on for a while, where ya been! P I've listened to the Stills more now that you mentioned them, I love em. Heh. So anyways! About the poem.. I like the simplness of this. Not bad at all. It's got a good rhyme scheme that fits as well. Nicely done my dear.
Jenna xoxo
Michelle.Walking.Contradiction chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
This is a realy strong poem and it touches me in sevral instances, there is just something about the ending that I can't quit place my finger on...just read over it once. This may also have to do with I am running on no sleep, great job!