Reviews for The Taste Of Flesh
Adriana M. Hauer chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
again, another breath-taking master piece. this one is particularly powerful for some reason _ - oh might it be the violent feelings? :D stunning sweetie, so realistically descriptive it almost hurt when I read it.
*one question, am I still gorgeous?*
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
oh! i love first person poetry...
man, there were some awesome things going on in this poem...
"Three drops of blood, ripples on the earth," that line was so cool, to have something as delicate as a drop of blood ripple the earth...freaken awesome (wow, im really getting into the word awesome arent i...)
"Look me in the eyes; tell me you love e,/Before...
Tell me I'm beautiful just one more time/Before..."
- i loved that theme, that idea, god it was cool.
anyways chica, great work, enjoyed oh so muchly. kudos!
*marches on to next poem*
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
Wow... I love your poetry because it's so... full of fantasy. Beautiful. I love the part
"Look me in the eyes; tell me you love me,
Before I confess to you what I've done,
How terribly I've betrayed moon and sun
Of this world you now see crumbling in fury."
And the last stanza, too. Wonderful.
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
wow.. I love this. I'll tell you honestly though, I really think you need to switch around the stanzas... cause they're all equally powerful on their own, but the way you have them mixed up kind of takes away.. mostly, I really think you should switch the last two stanzas around.. it gives it much more of a punch-y ending, you know what i mean? To me, it would seem more powerful if you put the stanzas in order of... 2, 3, 1, 4, 5, 7, 6. It just makes the story behind the poem flow better to me.. because it's such a heartbreaking story.. I love how you write such great characters in your poems and come up with such tragic tales! *grin* Anyway, it's great.. it really is!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
I think its awesome... nive rhyming.,.. cool how its differet patterns in each stanza... very powerful poem
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
O_O
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geez . . . poor angel, dude. lol. really though, that was fantastic. completely sucked me in. by the end of it my heart was actually aching for the poor thing. "tell me i'm beautiful just one more time" ah! so unbearably sad. makes me want to know more about her story, actually; how she fell in love with the mysterious 'creature of the night' in the first place, and what he did to her or whatnot. this could be like the prologue to it, or something. lol. ah yes, well, enough of my grand schemes. gorgeous poem, chica mia. ;) kudos!