Have you heard of a Mary Sue?

And clarifying that hugging her little brother wasn't sexual is a really weird direction to take it. Isn't that just ... implied?

:))) I like how dark this story is :p I think it adds more depth instead of the typical self pity and I'm going to blame myself while wallowing story you know :p? Update soon :)

Jesus, this made me cry.

Im addicted.

to this story.

And. . .theres no more chapters.

Gah.

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Im really really into this story.

I love it so much.

Wow.

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Oh dear.

He knows now.

Maybe it's better?

Maybe it's not.

But that girl; I don't like her.

Wow; at first I was shaken by Arty's thought about wishing it was anyone even Erin except her. It was kind of selfish but I can't even bring myself to want to keep that word there since she was getting raped. Wow.

And then Ian said her name! Im so happy.

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And then Alex came into the end.

And it was perfect.

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:] I like Alex. Ahahahhaha, I don't have much else to say. except AH. She found him. - I kind of forgot about that part by the end though. :] My minds wrapped up around Alex

I like the two of them together.

I liked this chapter.

Every story I read the girl seems to run all the time.

God, I want to do that.

I have a really huge urge to run right now.

:] I like their agreement.

I really liked it :]

I was very happy when she hit that guy. I had to read it twice, ahaha.

Just so you know, I think you missed a 'y' in body because it just says boy in the ninth paragraph from the bottom.

I kind of think its funny that her clothing measurements are all messed up. :]

I like the boys. :]

They make me laugh.

Wow, the ending was really intense.

But Im glad Erin was it - ? - was the first to find Arty and to stay with her.

But im really sad she had to go.