Reviews for He Is Risen
Audrey Portman chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
wow, there's so much truth and meaning to this; well written
Eirien chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
I like it very much, the negativity of the rest of the poem makes the need for salvation apparent and sets off that last stanza all the more powerfully. That last stanza also kind of redeems the rest of the poem, hints that every pain will be swallowed up in hope, every darkness in light. I just think pain and sorrow add so much more depth to a poem and make us able to relate. It's what the world is like, what our lives are like. It's what creates the need for a saviour at all. Good piece.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
beautiful ending! i liked the negativity though...don't know y negative thoughts always attract me.