Reviews for Heart For Sale
Emerald Lynne Stonne chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
That's really cute... I like it lots!
writingwithfire chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
Simple and effective. The final line clinches it, but you might try to change the broken in the second line. A haiku is so short it is best not to use the same word in it twice. Anyway, I liked it. Most haiku's focus on imagery, but your poem was refreshing.
somethingpoeticandmeaningful chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Wow. This is my favorite one of your new ones. I really like it, awesome job.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
Nice, beautiful use of language.