Reviews for Shattered Dreams
jsprincess247 chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
hey hun, all i can say is WOW! its awsome i think i like it more than any story i read. i mean its really good. its about u basicly most of it lee and nathan haha sanda its sara...wtvr u did an awsome job im so proud of u i can twait till teh next chapter...update soon please mwaz
Enigmaofthesoul7 chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Lana,
That was beautiful. The settings were perfect, the story brilliant, and most importantly, the writing? Genuine.
I'm writing this at 12:48 in the morning, after finishing up chapter 15 of "Remedy".
I've just reread your story so the flavor of it could remain in my mouth for but a moment longer. It's amazing. I saw "The Notebook" tonight. I don't think I've ever felt that way, the way I felt after seeing it. It was tragical and overly romantic. 7 years passed by before the starcrossed lovers met each other once again. He wrote her 365 letters, one every day for a year, and yet, her mother hid them all. She called him trash and told her daughter that he wasn't for her, but in the end, she was faced with her own decisions. Memories of him haunted her. She wouldn't let go, even though she was engaged to be married and when she saw a picture of him in the newspaper, standing next to a house that he had promised to rebuild for her in their youth, she went to see him. Memories fluttered past her like butterflies. He had seen her kiss another man but had decided to build the house up just the way she wanted it , despite it all. She had found her soulmate at seventeen. Maybe what Johny said wasn't true after all?
I'll tell you more about it, if you haven't already seen it. Maybe you did...
Love, Mel
p.s. I'm happy that you have experienced true love. Maybe one day, I'll have that. :). By the way, you're beautiful.
Aracaya Ruby chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
This is very good, and the plot is interesting. I can't wait to see how it turns out for Liz and I really hope you update. thanks
keep.breathing chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Wow! You gotta update soon! This is great so far. I can tell you are serious about writing, which is a good thing because a lot of people on here aren't. I can really relate to Liz because everything is falling apart in my life right now also. Anyway. . . I'll make this short. If you could come check out my story "Searh for Northern Lights" I'd really appreciate hearing your comments, since I think you really know what you're doing when it comes to writing. Anyway, hope to hear from you and update soon! ~Abigail