| Reviews for Gift Of Ghosts |
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   VeeVeeLa chapter 3 . 5/22/2009 this is great! whats gonna happen next? |
| Gilaine chapter 3 . 8/14/2007 It is a shame that you never finished this. It's a brilliant idea and held promise. So, as this was written three years ago, I presume you can drive now? :D ByeBye |
| hotaru89 chapter 3 . 7/26/2007 Awesome job so far, I really like the story idea and the characters. I also like your writing-style, I enjoy reading your work! Please update soon, because I'm really looking forwards to more, I cannot wait at all! |
| Furfaidz chapter 1 . 1/24/2007 good job! pretty funny too |
| SilverM0on chapter 3 . 8/31/2006 why did you let this story die.. it havent been updated for a year and a half and its great... what a shame to lose sutch an interesting story... |
| icedfaerie chapter 3 . 7/10/2006 Great story! I love the plot and the characters, I can't wait until the next chapter. |
| RavensDescent chapter 3 . 11/13/2005 *huggles this story* I love this, really really love it! keep writing,Raven |
| Sylvia Ann Elliot chapter 3 . 6/26/2005 This is a good start to an original story; others have written about necromancers and shamans, but your character's desire to lose her power makes her unique. You have a good plot going here, what with Damian almost knowing about Jessica's "gift". I love Luna's character. She's so sweet and friendly. There were some spelling and grammar errors; have a friend, teacher, or me read it through and fix them for you. My email is if you want me to do it for you. One major problem was tense switching. All in all, a good start to an excellent story, and I'm adding you to Author Alert so that I can read more of it _ |
| Arrow's Flight chapter 1 . 5/29/2005 Nice chapter. I like the plot of the story, and can tell that it will get interesting. . . KEEP WRITING! -Arrow's FLight- Where are you? PLEASE UPDATE! |
| KPWilliams chapter 1 . 3/28/2005 Good, I like it so far. The only problem is that you seem to have trouble with homonyms, I noticed that in this and in Caged. You may not notice it because it's your own piece, but I just want to point it out to you for future you need someone to edit your pieces for you, you can always ask , good work, and I want more. Also, OFAC ch. 2 - Metamorphasis of a Child will be posted shortly. Thanks for your review on it. |
| Thea Lowe chapter 3 . 3/9/2005 Ah! This is a very well written story (and it's interesting too!) I hope you continue updating! |
| Spazmic Kitty chapter 3 . 3/1/2005 I love your story. By the way, I was wondering if you've ever read The Mediator...if you've read it before you'll know why I'm asking. Anyways, keep writing 'cause it's great. |
| Something Uncertain chapter 3 . 3/1/2005 I love the idea you have going, this story's great! Luna's adorable, and I love Jessica's attitude. There are a few minor grammar errors, but nothing terrible. Keep it up! |
| Alice Potato chapter 3 . 2/27/2005 Excellent story so far. There are very few errors and the characters are great. *grins* I like Jessica. She's very cool. Hmm . . . I can't really think of anything that needs improving . . . Just update soon! And I'm sorry if my review looks kinda cramped. FictionPress has been messing them up lately . . . *growls* ~*Namarie*~ |
| Meli-dear chapter 3 . 2/27/2005 Ahw, Luna has to be the most cute, sweet and innocent ghost I ever saw! She's so... happy! I loved how she tried to get Damian to speak - he's pretty cool by the way. The way he acts is already very much his own. Uhm.. if that made sense *foolish grin* Only I'm wondering how Damian and Luna died. Will that become more important later in the story? Did Luna already know Jessica before she died? Questions... questions... Nothing wrong with them, questions are good! D |