Reviews for Pretend That Your Mine
hehhee chapter 6 . 1/4/2005
they're so funny
tere chapter 5 . 1/4/2005
how nice of him to "pick her up" lol
yea chapter 4 . 1/4/2005
nice kiss
goodgood chapter 3 . 1/4/2005
hey chapter 2 . 1/4/2005
aw. why do they hae to be such a-holes o her
hey chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
great chapter
Shorty Baby chapter 7 . 1/2/2005
Hey... another great story... I am waiting for the next chapter... I hope it won't be too long. Although you should really do something about the difference between chapters 4 and 5. It is really hard to understand!
I-eat-Paste chapter 7 . 12/9/2004
It was good! update this soon oh and dont 4get about normal girl.
Tsukinani chapter 7 . 11/29/2004
Awesome chappie!update soon ne?

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J.J chapter 7 . 11/27/2004
this is pretty cool. i like your characters, they seem like real people. keep up the good work.
celebra chapter 6 . 10/17/2004
hey, I kind of like this. update some more
Crecy chapter 6 . 10/17/2004
Pretty cool. Please udpate soon.
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Tsukinani chapter 6 . 10/17/2004
's good chika. Update soon ne?
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InmoonlightIwalk chapter 5 . 9/23/2004
loverly story .. Your characters are always so original and schnazzy. And oo-la-la dont all the chaps in this story sound like lookers. hee hee. Luka (love the name btw, all of them are quite imaginative) is just dandy, she should totally hook up with the bad-arse Westie. Update soon. And dont worry the confusion is what makes the story worth reading more of so you can try to piece everything together... or maybe thats just me o well
Ta !
MoMo chapter 5 . 9/18/2004
Ok so let me see if i have this right... Luka was with weston at the end of the last chap. and then at the beginning of this one she goes out with that one guy her friend wanted her to go out with... decides that she dosnt like him and walks home... to be stoped by weston... (and then hes going to take her to her apartment and fuck her... right?) Other than being a little lost i like it... up-date soon so that i know what happens...
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