Reviews for Pretend That Your Mine |
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![]() ![]() Hey, nice story... not quite sure where your headded with it, but the last chapter was funny... so good job and up-date soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() LoL... the exploding hotdog. |
![]() ![]() this is really good. I hope you continue it. |
![]() ![]() It's good! I think I'm going to enjoy it! |
![]() ![]() It's good! I think I'm going to enjoy it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad definitly not bad but the plot is kinda ambiguous update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story keep writing I want to know what happends next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome write another chappie ne? We Could Be Gone |
![]() ![]() Babe, this is lovely. Continue the great work. And I agree with chelsea a one hundred should let people read your poetry, its amazing (just like you) and brilliant and smart. |
![]() ![]() Babe, this is lovely. Continue the great work. And I agree with chelsea a one hundred should let people read your poetry, its amazing (just like you) and brilliant and smart. |
![]() ![]() Babe, this is lovely. Continue the great work. And I agree with chelsea a one hundred should let people read your poetry, its amazing (just like you) and brilliant and smart. |
![]() ![]() O wowers! This is freaking awsome! I love your work and would definatley love to read your poetry! please update soon! and pretty please post your poetry! your an awsome writer! be proud of you work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job. It's a great start, and I like how you give the reader a good picture of what the hard core punk-rock scene is like. Good one, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() This is a wonderful start. Your writing ability is amazing. Update soon! |