Reviews for Fear2
emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Alex i never read this before and to be honest it has got me really worried, r u ok? Plz talk to me, if ya don't wana share i'll understand but you no ur secrets are safe with me. The poem is excellant and extremely well written, i still find it amazing that you can write this way the lines"As my innocence slowly drifts out the open window, now his pleasure reaches new heights" are very powerfull and amazingly descriptive, they say more to me than anything. I'm blown away by this peice Alex, i'll have to talk to you soon
TheLimitoftime chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Definetly one of your best poems, the atmosphere is so powerful throughout the poem
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Whoa, magnificent, truly magnificent, sent shivers up my spine. This is brilliantly written. You have really portrayed the sense of fear in this one, almost had me locking my door.
Keith Andrew
Rosiel's Servant chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
**shivers** that strikes really close to home with a friend of mine. Nicely written. Can't wait to read some of your other works.