Reviews for Trapped
Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Such powerful writing . . . I love it. Keep it up!
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Nice rhyming theme in this one. I particualarly love the lines:
"I can hardly see through tears so deep.
They form a puddle of sapphire pain" Sapphire pain is just so original and has a dark, chilling beauty to it. Keep it up!
Hawke
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Intersting. It kinda reminds me of my poem "caged"...
Anyways, great work here. ;)
Daphne