Reviews for Black magic the dark force
mad-man2 chapter 31 . 7/27/2005
i dont know how to review a vamp story...

i find that strange but i cant help it...

ill think on it and get back to you.

later
Daemon McRae chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Love this book. I like the original version better, though. But I have two words for you from your favorite cousin: SPELL CHECK.

Peace to thou that live on Earth,Daemon.
Calimbor chapter 13 . 4/24/2005
It is a neat story, though it seems a bit rushed. You got some terrible spelling mistakes and you have trouble using past and present tense without confusing the reader on what's going on.

Look it through. Correct your spelling mistakes as they take away the fun of reading your story.
Shadow Wolf1 chapter 8 . 12/22/2004
This story is excellent, I'll leave more reveiws later, with openions, and suggestions.
Furukawa Toshiro chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Hey just wanted to let everyone know that this is my fav. novel (it was one of the books that got me to start writing.) And I can't wait to read the next novel entitled "The Gate" later!