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Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
Green apple Thou chew,

Jealous my heart doth eschew,

Thy kisses it stole.



Warm Thou embrace love,

Jealous my heart time forsook,

Thy gentle touches.



Thou, dream of my dreams,

Jealous mind empties all else,

Soft Thy entreaties.



Midnight lover Thou,

Jealous day hides obscurely,

Thy rays light my eve.



Thou soft rug of days,

Jealous feet tread silken threads,

Woven Thy mist breath.



Thou,—for no one else,

Jealous can make my heart more,

Except for Thy love.



Thou art my soul's eyes,

Jealous, flashing at my glance,

Penetrating Thy . . .



Thou, longest blue dream,

Jealous yellow sparkles bright,

At Thy sky spread wide.
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
I like this poem alot. Great job! Thanks for reviewing for me!
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
wow this was beautiful!
b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
it's not chessy. It's really cute. I love "Anyone that you know is someone I want to be". Thanks so much for reviewing all my work!
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
:'( Maybe you think it's cheesy, but aw that's cute! My favorite two lines are "Anyone that you know, is someone i want to be", hehe! . short and sweet, it made me smile! *write on*
xHannahx chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
dude, it may be cheezy, but its soo sweet! it so sums up that dogged following of someone who means so much.
Han
Mormon Princess 1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
gRR. LOVE SHOULD DIE. NOT REALLY WHATEVER. I REALY DO THINK THIS IS THE CHEEZIEST POEM I'VE READ BUT THE BEST ONE TOO. LOL I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M SAYING... GRR.. OR MEANING!
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
I wouldn't say cheezy. It's pretty good. Not my kind of poem but I like it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Aw, that is really sweet. And it has great rhythm and awesome rhyming.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
sweet