|Reviews for But It's All|
| YoLo NoR chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
since you reviewed something of mine, I decided to check out yours, too. All I have got to say is ... thinking...(I'm speechless) This is one good song. I heard the music, saw the music video, and i loved the lyrics (they rhyme!and they are not like you forced the words to make sense rhyming it) NICE. Bad things...can't think of any at the moment. Oh, 5th stanza, last line, only one 'l' in all. But that's grammatical. NICE.
| Poetry-Wonder chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
This is a kick ass song. I really liked the rhyming. You used unique vocabulary too. My favorite stanza was "Hallucinations are forming
It's hard to ignore them
There is no escaping"