wow sandra. that is deep! I can so relate to that. good job. I LOVE IT!

I really LOVE the last 4 lines of this poem.

i love the whole thing, but those last 4 lines ... well wow.

heh, :) good work.

Keeo Writing,

Ravens Descent.

Aww... that's so cute and sad at the same time. The only thing that seemed out of place was the phrase "long red hair". That is the only description of the narrator (besides that she's female), so it was a bit odd. Otherwise, very good. Lovely last line.

Oh, yes... very sorry about the delay. Thanks for the review!

Short, but it rocked!

wow. this is great. definately going on my favorites list. i feel like this sometime... like the voice that no one ever hears...great descriptions i love it.

cincerly kashe

I like it. The rythem was a little odd, but not so much that it ruined the poem. I like odd things, so keep that rythem up!

I have always liked the concept of trying to hide who you are and are meant to be. It makes for lovely poetry. Remind me to upload some.

I told you I'd write about wolves. I love werewolves there second only to pheonixes and dragons.

Thank you for your review.

-Arrow's Flight-

Awesome, awesome. Another great poem, and one I'm sure we can all relate to in some way. I really liked the last two lines, by the way.

Cheers!

Wow, another story of yours I can relate to. I'm still like that sometimes. That last two lines stuck in my mind more than the rest of the poem(?), probably because they rhymed. Great work.

Awesome - and true. Nice job w/ the rhyming - you made it rhyme, but not overwhelm with -ish-ness (i like to connect words...)

Very good poem. :)

I really liked it. It's definitely something that almost everyone can relate to...it summed up my feelings perfectly.

Great job. XP

Very deep and thoughtful...keep up the good work! BTW: Next chapter of The Otherworld has been posted, and you will find the answer to your question.

I can definetly identify with you on this one, about feeling like one has such a small, insignificant voice. And about trying to be someone other than we are-we all do it. I like the beginning, but maybe at the end you could try to show and not tell (I know you probably hear that all the time, I know I do. I suppose I shouldn't be advising you to do something I never catch in my own stories, but there you are. I'm a hypocrite, I guess...). Anyway... also, your rhyming seems a little forced at times, though I can't write rhyming poetry at all, so there you are. I like the message of the poem.

I think is is a wonderful poem! Keep up the good work. Thanks for reviewing. If YOU keep updating, I'LL keep reviewing. It's fair isn't it?
*Silly little wink and smile*

actually it is quite good. Sometimes I felt the same way. Great work! _

I like it, for your first attempt its really good, excelent use of imagry and emotion. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.