Reviews for Eternal Goodbye
Ohmm chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Oh I like this.
I don't really get the whole flow, but the overall picture after reading the entire thing is very powerful.
Most of the time I don't quite like repetition, but you've pulled it off great!
Keep on writing!
chocomunke chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
thats really really good. Great poem
VinylButterfly chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Wow man this is great keep up the great writing
Flip :p
Anglachel67 chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
the repetition was great, it really helped give the poem cadence. luved it.
Devil6667 chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
This was a great poem... haunting, really... I like the style, it's very well written...
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Incredibly haunting and beautiful. I really love this.
Dakota Alexus chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
This is interesting, i can say i don't understand it at all but I still love it. It's captivating.
Louis the Rogue chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
I agree: this one can be translated in many ways. For me it seemed to be about a breakdown of the self.
Clarachu01 chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
Ok here goes: In the beginning, I got the jist of ok, so children in this world aren't really "part" of the world, meaning they're oblivious as to what goes on. Then there you are, watching them, and feeling alone like there's nothing to live for. I don't see how that ties in together. But then it seems as though a voice, like the voice in your head, is telling you to fall into an eternal sleep, to die. So like, I guess overall my review of this poem is this: This poem means that getting older really sucks! É
windinthewires chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
i like this. it's great. nothing more really to say.