Reviews for Happy Birthday, Jake
Raven-ember chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
aw, that was sad yet nicely written! happy late birthday, jake!
Zombie Zak chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
oh...That's very touching and beautiful. )-:
Kit Green chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Lovely. Sad, but lovely.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
The lady from the forest is from the other poem right? it's neat how you connected the two like that. I also like the ending and how it wraps up the whole poem. it's a sad..but well written ending! :)
The Juggler 42 chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Someone deserves some sympathy. Happy birthday Jake. I've felt like this... I actualy turned 16 a few weeks ago a few days after a major heartbreak. Nice poem, it holds its own. One critisism: I dont think the lady of the forsest line and the line after fit with the rest of the poem. Give me an IM sometime. Or R&R anything of mine that looks interesting. Critisism is welcome.
Serfious chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Just to clear up some confusion, the Lady of the Wood line refers to my poem "Hidden Grove". ALso, I want to say thanks to you guys.
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Very moving. I was confused by one line about the "lady of the forest," (I don't know what that's supposed to mean) but other than that, the poem was great.
Tuomas Hassam-Smith chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
This is a tragic poem! But I like it.
Happy birthday Jake!
-Lord Zuriel-
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Oh, happy birthday happy birthday happy birthday happy birthday. For he's a jolly good fellow...
Are you feeling better? Great poem by the way, keep up the good work.
Much love,