Reviews for Eternal Sleep
Atlen chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
Wow, you are really good!:)
Kitten-Fantastico chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Yay well done. and been there donet that . do you have a live journal I do
meow4now.
rock on poetry queen
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
I don't know what it is about the words you write but they have a way of just coming together. I really liked this one though...Maybe my favourite by you.
Cthulhu chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Good poem, well written, except for the opening lines of stanzas one three and five, they just seemed to rhyme too much, I don't know if you understand what I mean. Maybye its just me.
All in all a good poem, keep it up.
Laelae chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Thats a really great poem. Its really descriptive and I can relate completely. Please write more!
~Lae~
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Great use of language and emotion. Very powerful piece. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.