Reviews for Negligent Chaos
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
here we go again with these poems.. you should so put them in a collection it would be amazing (and only take up one slot on my fav stories)
krystal-jasna chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
hi, i like the way you write. it makes me think and reflect. but then again i suppose if i never experienced this before i won't understand it fully. but yeah overall great poem :)
Oath chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Sad yet sweet yet heartwrenching.. i can't make up my mind. Wonderfully written though.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
A blow to the solar plexus I wasn't read to receive-left me helpless for a while. Well written, though tough subject. -m-
sheza chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Really, very beautiful!
thanks a lot for your review! It was very appreciated!
i-kill-4-fun chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
beautiful. ur on my fave author's list
be afraid be very afraid chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
HEY
I REALLY LIKE THIS. ITS SURREAL AND WILL BE WHATEVER U WANT IT TO BE.
KEEP WRITING.
X
wiener knocker chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
usually id say this poems wreaks like crusty onion toes, but... eh its was pretty good, i bet your hot too not like these ugly ass bitches they got runnin around this gayass website, man keep it up sugar, hur dee hurr hur, LATER HOOCHIE MAMA