Reviews for Moon
Adriana M. Hauer chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
wow! stunning! as always! i love the moon too :D
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
the moon is gorgeous and so is this poem..awesome personification
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Aww, beautiful poem. I have a thing for the moon, too... it's very.. poetic. Hehe. Another amazing piece, Mia! I love your metaphors. I am infinitely jealous.
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
ah yes, the moon is indeed quite a splendid thing. so many poems have been written about it, but i believe congratulations are in order because you have managed to make yours unique something which is growing constantly harder to do, you see. ;) "I am so stained, sullied and filthy" loved that in context, made a great juxtaposition, and the line itself has a great sound to it. "the golden sun covered in silver mist" i was on the point of thinking it was no longer possible to come up with a unique and powerful description for the moon itself, but by the gods! proven wrong again! lol. that was so gorgeous, seriously. absolutely stunning. great piece, chica! :D
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
ah! moon! *dies*
doesnt the moon just rock your shizna?
lol, anyway, lovely poem my dear. i especially liked the line...
"the golden sun covered in silver mist"
twas quite an intriguing throught really. anyways, great work, kudos!
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Aww, such a gorgeous poem. :) The moon IS gorgeous... I love it as well. Such a beautiful, sweet poem... yay!
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
That was awesome! Very descriptive and not cliche at all! I love the rhyming too! *fav list* :)