While I was reading it, I was thinking that maybe this wasn't really a poem but more of a song and I was wondering about it until I saw the author's note at the end. P Good job! If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! )

i like it. its a tad long but my songs are always long to so sh its all good! nah but really, a unique twist and edge to songwriting. mine are so blah standard stuff, lol... good song.