Reviews for Hypocricy
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
i can defiantely relate to a lot of that.. pwoerful language
A-Whimsical-Freak chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Another wonderful piece that rings true in the ears of honesty!
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Again a really awesome poem. It's like we all have to be and do something, live up to these expectations even if we don't care what people think. We say we don't care yet we have to keep up this persona. I liked how you said that!
Rara Punk chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Alright, if a little disorganised (or maybe its just that I like order! lol). The only thing I didnt enjoy about it was the flow, it seemed a bit jumpy, but I'm not sure if that is because of the stream of consious element to it. But all that said - you do make some very good points, and what you said was very comanding. :D
zamthezombieman chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
I can definately relate to how you feel.
So...yur goth. Goth girls are always cool, not like preps. I only date goths. Goths have good minds and are intelligent.
So, you watch Degrassi? Its one of my favorite shows. Ellie is so cool.I watch the show only to see Ellie. But, anyway, review my stuff sometime. Well, it was nice reading your poem, keep it up. Talk to ya later.