|Reviews for Broken Angel|
| emjaykirkland chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Aww, that was really touching!
| DransyForever chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
That was so deep. And beautiful.
I loved this the most:
"As she breaks down inside
Too pained to even stand
Too hurt to look up to me
She reaches out a bloody hand"
So powerful. Great job :)
| incandescent.smiles chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
oh so pretty and sad, i loves it!
| bemused scribbler chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
beautiful. so sad, and so...wow. this was great. *adds it to favorites*-silent rain
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
So very beautiful. I love it very much! The start sounded like me and the ending just completley blew me away. Keep up this type of writing, I love it very much.
| Dawninglily chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
That was a really beautiful poem, very touching. Especially the imagery. I loved that.
Frosty the Pine Tree
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
This was soo beutifully written ! *wipes tears from her eyes* i love it !
| lovingyoubehindglasswalls chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
i like this one too
| tocs chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
~tocs...(previously p. smile)
| Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
AWE! Poems like this alwyas tingle a soft spot, almost to tears. Poems that do that to me (Someone who doesn't cry that often) have to be good. Awesome stuff!
| hakubaikou chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
oh my... this is great Chelle... really great. As always, the rhyme scheme is good... and you were able to convey so much emotion and meaning. Beautiful... simply beautiful.
| Me chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
*clap clap clap* very nicely done, best work ive seen so far, keep it up
| battousai24 chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
It's beautifully written. I like it. I can really imagine what you wrote happening.
| Rose of Darkness 666 chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Oh my god...That's so beautiful. Too often I've felt like that broken angel and this is just so touching. I'm sitting at my computer crying as I type this review. Not crying in a bad way. I haven't been able to cry even though I wanted to, and this was just so beautiful it was able to let the tears out. Definatly on my favorite stories list. Wow.
| Orange 6ix chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
oh wow. just wow.