Reviews for Jule
Jennie chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
OKay i realy like this story! thanks soo much for reviewing TO the WInter Games!

Jennie
Dying Rose chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
written, but a little confusing. I'm not sure how he managed to get into a basement and then suddenly he's tied up by orcs. You might want to explain that some more...Otherwise though, this is really cool! I can see a lot of potential in this as a really good story, but you only have one chapter! Ack! Are you going to update?
WigginBro chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Wow. I really like the narration style, but everything is happening so fast, I can't really enjoy. What's more, there's not enough explanation of what's going on in Jule's head. If you slowed the pace down a little bit and explained what Jule is thinking at times, it would be a lot more enjoyable.