|Reviews for The deal|
| Allie chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Whoa, good poem. idk ur style, but from wut i have read this is like u said rare, yet it was vry well written. I like it.
| Kriss-C chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
I just have to say that this poem helped me understand a few things! Thanks
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
this would make a great song.
the words are apt
and bring out feeling well.
the image built
| Leo chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Hey buddy...THis is awesome a lil kinky for real but you know u got a skill like no other You can write anything BRAVO!
| Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
great poem great flow great rhyming
| Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
I actually got a few twisted laughs out of that one. But it still pretty good. Good job.