You have managed to make your characters different from each other, which can be hard with multiple character stories, and to make them believable, well all except Gabe but that is one of my own peccadilloes. The foster parents program here in Canada has similar problems, though it is the children with 'extra' challenges that suffer the worst. The system improves but at a snail's pace.

Intriguing. On to find out more :)

A well-crafted beginning. Just the right hint to mystery, good introduction to setting, characters, and history. Lovely work.

What the hell man? WHY Gabe doesn't do something? He just stay there all quiet...Well interesting fic. )

I don't know what to say... just that...It's so fucking great!

Oh my god, I can't believe I haven't found this story earlier! I LOVE Gabe and Dimitri and Nixy and just EVERYONE! This story was just so genuinely GREAT! The strength Gabe found in order to overcome his past, especially with the help of Dimitri, was just so inspiring! And the relationship between the two was absolutely adorable! Gah! I know I'm probably rambling, but I just LOVED this story so much!

HE'S GONNA GIVE THAT GIRL CAFFIENE! o.o to me it seems she on a all time high already lol X3 he's just signed up for a rather eventful day lol x3 ahhh that Nix cute as a button i tell you x3 but yeah, this is an amazing story i can tell from the way you got me hooked already X3

Admittedly the shortness of the last few chapters is bugging me. Not that the content isn't good, it is, but the chapter length bothers me when it's that short. Nothin' against you, I write myself and know you can't always make things as long as you might want, but I just thought I'd mention it.

What's up with Paul anyway? Sounds pretty fucked up to me. Wonder if Gabe and his new friend are going to go anywhere ...?

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Interesting story. I have so many questions about the main character it's probably ridiculous. I'm so glad that the dog stopped Paul. Can't wait to read more,

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nice... there's a phrase used a couple of times in this chapter " she came into me last night" sounds awkward to me...? maybe it should be "she came to* me last night" but idk. I like your writing style :) good work with completing this.

i like the story but i hated how u rushed the end it's like you couldn't wait to get it over with. nice writing style, looking forward to reading more of your work

*sobs in corner* I always cry when they end *sobs more*

Farewell Dim! I love you and Gabe~!

the ending made me go "aw" outloud and my dad told me to shut up :/

But yea that was cute. and Paul...eh, i dunno what to think about him yet.

Great story, keep up the good work.