Reviews for You Can Never Again
Ripfang Dragon chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Wow. That was really touching. I felt the poem. Really, it did! The only thing that bothers me is: your lack of description words. When I write, I try to use big words that people don't often use. A great way to find these words are on . It really does come in handy! _
I'm not too much of a poet myself, but I would appreciate it if you check out my poems and stories. _ That would be nice...
defiance-is-lovely chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
this is a very meaningful poem...i just add more to it, it would really make the poem shine...i just feel a little incomplete, because after reading that i know, i just want more! very very nice job_
B. Itokuzu chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Nice. Its sounds kinda sad/longing. I like it.