wow. Really good.

yeah..i guess i have felt like this...u know the depression and wanting to be accepted, its crazy. I can really relate to this. It was awesome and well written.

intense... I recently felt like this, so I wrote a poem too. Anyway, again great poem/song. I think everybody feels like this sometime in their life. Some more than 's just , keep writing chere. I wanna read more. lol

Bobby! You NEVER told me you wrote a POEM! This rocks. It sounds like the lyrics from some band. And that is good. Shame there's so much profanity and suggestive themes: you could have entered this in the poetry grammys last year. But then it wouldn't be... what it is. If you in fact wrote it then. Hmm... publish date 8-29-04. August. After we got back from camp, but before school started. That's actually the day when I got my firey shoes... I'll shut up now.