Reviews for Elements in Turmoil
your guilty pleasure chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
I really like the imagery you give in your pieces, and how your words vibrantly express what you are thinking rather than just "the angry storms run wild" yours is all "Malicious storms run rampant" which is awesome. I love ur poems, I'm sure you've hear that lots, but hey- once more couldn't hrt now could it ;P
oh- and ur Genius AND Insane- how's that? lol
makeshift parachute chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
I like the first and the last one best. They're all great, they hold so much meaning, I love them.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Wow, a haiku! I write a lot of those...I probably shouldn't, but this was great. very descriptive. I liked how you talked of different parts of natures, like the earth, the wind, fire, etc. great job!
Lady Jedi chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Well written. I liked the imagery that you created, and it is so true what is happening. Good Job
L. S. Lynn chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
so true! Great over all effect
Whispers of the Lost chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Too true... The overall effect on this is very powerful. Very nice choice of words, it paints a vivid picture in my mind. Great work!
katmonkey chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Great haikus. The imagery and description in them are really good! Well done! :D