i really did like this chapter cause it show us the readers why her husband didnt want her to leave! please oh please if you read your review please update for your loyal readers! - lily

write more this story is so god!

sigh, this is a truly lovely and intriguing story. I can only hope that you may continue this someday, so I may actually know what really happened to Peren. I read this story perhaps 5 years ago, and fell in love with the dynamic between Peren and Hayden. On the one hand, I can't understand where Hayden's iciness comes from, and why he is also somewhat guarded around Peren. Goodness, that whole saying about how she will disappoint him certainly sounds like he doesn't have that much faith in her. Unless he's just making a remark about her restless antics. And on the other, you can still tell that he really cares about her. I'm desperate to learn more about the characters and the background of what happened, as well as their relationship. I especially like how Peren is still trying to accept Hayden - the entire "Do I love you?" thing...absolutely brilliant. Just because he's tall, dark, and handsome also kind of screams caution, and I'm glad Peren has that instinct in her. And it doesn't help that he's not telling her what happened...I'd want to run away too. With no memory of anything, how terribly frustrating everything would be...I'd say Peren is doing a pretty good job of coping, despite not knowing how she got into that state.

wow, you last updated this when i was 11. that's a long, long, time ago

i enjoyed that a lot. it's a shame you never finished-but incase one day you have the wild notion to continue, i'll add you to my alerts

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great, original start fic but one criticism is that the servants relaxed a little bit to quickily into informality.

can't wait, bring on the next chapter

XD I swear with everything I read and have witnessed I'm terrified of drinking

~Miki

:) This is marvelous! I love the wonderful language you use.

FAVS!

~Miki

please update, i love this story

I LOVE THIS STORY! I know you haven't updated in years and you might not even look at this website anymore but please update! I look forward to future chapters and hope that you will update!

:( will you ever update?

This is really interesting. You have a talent for writing.

Please update soon!

I like this. Very suspenseful/ interesting.

awe! suspense! woah i kno it hasn't been like updated in 3 yrs, so if u come across this message could you perhaps think about finishing it? because i really love this story and am hoping for further reading _

Um, so I realize that you haven't updated in oh, say, THREE YEARS or so, but please, for the sake of your readers, will you please continue? This story is just so beautiful and well-written that it would be a total shame not to continue. The plot is so mysterious yet romantic yet fun yet dark yet EVERYTHING, that I love it. I remember reading this story a long time ago, and I finding it again, reminds me just how good it is. Please, even if you just end it with one more chapter, continue! It's too good not too. :)

Of course...now I look at the dates. This hasn't been updated in a long time! YEARS!

That's really sad. I have no more chapters to read.