Reviews for Dust Motes
tabiboi chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
I love this- you are so talented! Keep writing, and if you get a chance, please R&R me.
Thanks, Tabi
Artificial Refuge chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I like this! Short, but very good. Yay for you!
Stefen chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Once again, really good, but quite strange. You know you ahve your name and shit at the bottom right?
Kur'denras chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
This isn't exactly a poem. I know a poem doesn't need to have rhyme, but this has no rhythm, is organized into paragraphs, and is written in the style of a very short story. It's good and all, but not exactly a poem.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
ah this is wonderful. the last line is so final i love it! and i think you're pen-name's real nice!
review me if you're free!